2009/11/30 Charles Matthews charles.r.matthews@ntlworld.com:
Thomas Dalton wrote:
But my draft is only 2 paragraphs...
OK, my version is now on http://uk.wikimedia.org/wiki/Talk:Press_releases/Free_online_news . Just wanted to illustrate what I meant about style.
I understood what you were suggesting, I'm just wondering why you think that is better. You sounded like you were quoting some standard rule about press releases and I know very little on the subject.