2009/11/30 Charles Matthews <charles.r.matthews(a)ntlworld.com>om>:
Thomas Dalton wrote:
But my draft is only 2 paragraphs...
OK, my version is now on
http://uk.wikimedia.org/wiki/Talk:Press_releases/Free_online_news . Just
wanted to illustrate what I meant about style.
I understood what you were suggesting, I'm just wondering why you
think that is better. You sounded like you were quoting some standard
rule about press releases and I know very little on the subject.