Timwi wrote:

Even shorter: Your [[IP address]] will be logged when you submit. If you are not [[Special:Userlogin|logged in]], it will be shown publicly. See [[Wikipedia:Privacy policy|privacy policy]].

"SUBMIT! SUBMIT TO WIKIPEDIA!" heh :-)

The use of "logged" in two different ways is (apparently) very bad. How about:

Your [[IP address]] is recorded when you edit. If you are not [[Special:Userlogin|logged in]], it will be shown publicly. See [[Wikipedia:Privacy policy|privacy policy]].

Can anyone go even shorter and not lose important info?

- d.