Timwi wrote:
Even shorter:
Your [[IP address]] will be logged when you submit. If you are
not [[Special:Userlogin|logged in]], it will be shown publicly.
See [[Wikipedia:Privacy policy|privacy policy]].
"SUBMIT! SUBMIT TO WIKIPEDIA!" heh :-)
The use of "logged" in two different ways is (apparently) very bad. How about:
Your [[IP address]] is recorded when you edit. If you are not
[[Special:Userlogin|logged in]], it will be shown publicly. See
[[Wikipedia:Privacy policy|privacy policy]].
Can anyone go even shorter and not lose important info?
- d.