I made a few more changes, but left the "current" versino of the page
untouched. Please review:
http://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft_Privacy_Policy_June_19_20…
SJ
On Wed, Jun 25, 2008 at 4:21 PM, Mike Godwin <mgodwin(a)wikimedia.org> wrote:
SJ writes:
I did some further condensing of language, and
replaced the second
person
everywhere with the third person. I also tried to clarify a few
sections
that I found misleading or incomplete... For instance, when you
email me
through the wiki, I can see /your/ email address.
After a review of both Nathan's and SJ's revisions, I've decided to
adopt those revisions. The current version of the revised draft
policy can be found at:
http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Draft_Privacy_Policy_June_19_2008
--Mike
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