On Mon, Jun 18, 2012 at 4:50 PM, Russavia <russavia.wikipedia(a)gmail.com>wrote;wrote:
Is that an edit of the article, or a whitewashing of
the article?
It turns out that she is most notable for the relief of command, and
the blanket removal of material from the article is not adhering to
WP:UNDUE, but seems more to be a whitewashing of the article.
What you have done is removed any context of the dismissal from the
article, and that is not a good thing.
Russavia
How so? The premise of the AfD outcome (and the general argument in favor
of the subject's notability) is that she is notable for more than just her
dismissal. So, focusing virtually the entire article on her dismissal is
giving it UNDUE weight. I reduced the unnecessary detail and left in the
pertinent elements - she was dismissed, it was because certain allegations
were upheld by her commanding officers, and all of the anonymous sniping
can still be found in the linked references.
~Nathan