On 10/02/2008, Steve Bennett <stevagewp(a)gmail.com> wrote:
Has the article changed since you made that comment?
They honestly
don't look "over-detailed", and certainly not "grotesquely" so.
Not in the slightest. Reading it is like trying to talk to a
trivia-addicted speed freak with a side fetish for statistics.
There are severe tone of voice issues throughout to boot. The article
is even littered with unqualified fictional statements such as "In the
Rhubarb Triangle (a triangle made up of the 3 cities of Leeds,
Bradford & Wakefield in West Yorkshire), rhubarb grows so quickly, you
can hear it grow."
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Earle Martin
http://downlode.org/
http://purl.org/net/earlemartin/