In a message dated 10/1/2008 10:00:42 PM Pacific Daylight Time,
snowspinner(a)gmail.com writes:
It's the same problem we have
in our fiction articles as we get grotesquely long plot summaries -
people narrate things event by event instead of tracing major threads,
and treating the article like an argument with a thesis statement and
evidence to back it up.>>
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I'm a bit of the camp that these things work themselves out over time. The
more editors you have in one article, the more grammar and style. I work on
a few articles, detail by detail to make them smoother. It doesn't help
however when someone like Britney keeps making news and then we get another dozen
new editors adding bits here there and all over messing up my beautiful
narrative!
Okay I don't think I've ever worked on her, there's only so much time and
there are so many scandals!
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