On 11/21/07, David Gerard <dgerard(a)gmail.com> wrote:
The rest of the text could really do with condensing,
yeah. You see a
slab of text like that and just think "tl;dr".
Here's some odd text:
"You can still read pages, but cannot edit, change, or create them."
1) Is there a difference between "edit" and "change"?
2) I find the "them" really weird. "You can eat the cake, but cannot bake
it."
Suggestion:
"You can still browse Wikipedia, but cannot edit pages or create new ones."
Steve