Chip Berlet wrote:
Hi,
Just out of curiosity, what specifically about the Jane Fonda entry is "crap?"
POV? Writing Style? Focus of Content? Rough text?
In the current examples, I'm mainly focussed on writing style.
"Her nickname as a youth—Lady Jane—was one she reportedly disliked. She traveled to Communist Russia in 1964 and was impressed by the people, who welcomed her warmly as Henry's daughter. In the mid-1960s she bought a farm outside of Paris, had it renovated and personally started a garden. She visited Andy Warhol's Factory in 1966. About her 1971 Oscar win, her father Henry said: "How in hell would you like to have been in this business as long as I and have one of your kids win an Oscar before you do?" Jane was on the cover of Life magazine, March 29, 1968."
This is a motley collection of facts, poorly expressed, poorly organized, and without context.
--Jimbo