In a message dated 5/24/2008 7:32:17 A.M. Pacific Daylight Time, refero.relata@gmail.com writes:

If the original addition is carefully worded to closely paraphrase a point in the secondary source, a copyeditor concerned about style might well - and frequently does - come in and change that such that it is no longer sufficiently faithful to the nuances in the source, since the copyeditor does not have access to the source.>>

------------ What I do in that case, is go back, and change the wording, and ref with a full quote in the footnote.

Quoting is always a good trump card for bad paraphrasing.

Will Johnson

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