If you have factual errors that should be corrected, those will be corrected (at some point when I get time I'll go through your modified version and integrate all those changes to our current article--or someone else can feel free to do so first if they have time). If your dispute is merely over the fact that you consider "womb" to be "anti-choice" terminology, then I think your concern is rather trivial, as well as not really well-grounded (it seems in this discussion Vicki generally agrees with you, but she has no problem with the term "womb" either).
-Mark
Our article is just not that bad. If anything is goes pretty easy on the horrific aspects of the procedure, which is all right, it it not quite Halloween yet.
Fred