2008/5/23 SlimVirgin slimvirgin@gmail.com:
It's a feature of having lots of people edit that articles tend to lack flow. There are very few editors who actually read a section of an article before they edit it. People believe that a factoid is missing, so they stick it in, regardless of what it does to the structure of the paragraph. It means that every article needs someone on hand to be endlessly copyediting it, which is a thankless task, especially where it's a contentious topic, because then you're accused of POV pushing if you move their factoid to retain flow.
Oh yeah. I didn't say it'd be easy, even if you can write :-)
- d.