On 2/10/08, Earle Martin wikipedia@downlode.org wrote:
What's the polite way of saying "grotesquely over-detailed summaries like these need to be attacked brutally with a chainsaw"? And what talk page can I say it on?
Has the article changed since you made that comment? They honestly don't look "over-detailed", and certainly not "grotesquely" so. The tone could be improved, and they could by copy-edited shorter, but as a summary of what was contained in the episode, it seems pretty much appropriate to me.
Steve