On 25/09/06, Steve Summit scs@eskimo.com wrote:
David Gerard wrote:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:David_Gerard/Process_essay I'd most welcome you all looking over it and letting me know of...
It needs a lot of wordsmithing. It's obvious to you what it's getting at, but it won't be to a first-time, uninitiated reader.
That's the sort of thing I need to hear about it.
(I took a stab at cleaning up two sections.)
I'll look with trepidation shortly ;-)
- d.