I've been invited to write an opinion piece on Wikipedia and the history of science for the inaugural edition of Spontaneous Generations ( http://jps.library.utoronto.ca/index.php/SpontaneousGenerations ), a new open content history and philosophy of science journal. I have a draft finished, and about two weeks before I need to send it in. I would appreciate any feedback other Wikipedians have on how to improve it and make it a more convincing plea for experts and graduate students to get involved. The word constraints are 1000-1500, and it is right around 1000 now, so there is plenty of room for changing things around.
Here is the draft: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ragesoss/sandbox
Any thoughts and constructive criticisms will be most welcome.
-Sage