michael west wrote:
I created a couple of articles about local Catholic churches (of outstanding architecture). I have been away on campus for a while and have not been able to check my articles. I will admit that my original wasn't great but it has now been transformed into an advert for the current order running the church see http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Church_of_the_Holy_Name_of_Jesus%2...
the new text is very dodgy but definately compliments my original text. Should I be bold and delete the text which offends me? I am unfortunately a congregant of the church and I know that the person who has written most of the new text is a cleric in the order. From both sides there is a conflict of interest. comments?
Hi Michael,
As you are both personally involved in the church concerned, suggested that in order to avoid 'conflict of persons' (perhaps more serious than CoI) to try and think out an 'encyclopedic' wording that you will all find OK. Is this anything to do with the Roman Rite and transubstantiation, by the way? Thanks -- luke