On 8/25/06, David Gerard dgerard@gmail.com wrote:
Good *edits* are always welcome?
I like that. I wonder if it's too jargonish.
It's still too cliquish for my liking. It's very reserved, like "Well, sir, I guess you can come in, but don't disturb the others, ok?" It has a very strong implied negative: "Bad edits are not welcome" which I don't think needs to be stated at this level. I really don't like the tone, I guess.
Maybe: "New editors wanted"? - we avoid promising some kind of irrevokable privelege, without any kind of threatening undertone.
"Made by people like you"?
Or even just a tweak to the current line like "Anyone can have a go" - again, we tone down the implied right of editing: we only promise to let them try once.
Steve