The larger point is that this isn't the ideal forum for finding editorial assistance. I'm surprised no one has yet responded with WP:SOFIXIThttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:SOFIXIT. At a glance, the page looks OK, if not great. Perhaps there are indeed serious problems with it, but being "un-sourced" as you first wrote does not seem to be the key problem. So fix it! You seem to have the interest and knowledge. That plus a little initiative is (often) all that separates a bad article from a good one.
On Mon, Feb 21, 2011 at 7:22 AM, Thomas Dalton thomas.dalton@gmail.comwrote:
On 21 February 2011 00:52, michael west michawest@gmail.com wrote:
No Thomas, there are problems with (a) the East Pakistan/West Pakistan
war
(Bhhutto was a memeber of government and never appeared on TV - it was
the
government leader who told of West Pakistan's capitulation)
I made no comment as to the accuracy of the article, only your claim that it is un-sourced. There are numerous sources in that article. The sources may be incorrect or the article may be misinterpreting the sources, but the sources are there.
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