Hi Derric,
On 10 Jun, 2014, at 7:15 am, Laura Quilter lquilter@lquilter.net wrote:
In fact, I really like your slides 3 and 4, and would recommend that your slides 10 & 11 be done in that style, too.
Agreed. I also worry a bit about your acronyms: it might not be obvious what “WP:RELIABLE” (slide 9) and “CC-BY-SA” means. I’d cite “Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources” for the first, and cite all the images in a single slide at the end (or just show your audience the excellent “Share Your Knowledge: Why?” video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CPWc18LswRM)
Apart from that, your presentation looks great! You can find other “Introduction to Wikipedia” presentations at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:GLAM/Bookshelf#Wikipedia_basics_for_... and https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:GLAM_presentations — I’ve added your presentation to the latter category, and you should consider adding your presentation to the Bookshelf.
All the best! Don’t forget to write about your edit-a-thon for “The Month in GLAM” [1] so we know how it went!
cheers, Gaurav
[1] https://outreach.wikimedia.org/wiki/GLAM/Newsletter/Newsroom