Hello Everyone!
It's time to review the WP:INCOTMhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:INCOTMfor the month of February 2012.
Last month, Dance in India http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dance_in_Indiawas the only article chosen for the INCOTM.
During the period under question, Dance in India had 208 edits from 20 contributors. This is quite good compared to the last month's COTM - Premchand http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Premchand which had 133 edits from 17 contributors. This months COTM was a success in my eyes as the following improvements were seen-
- Lede was improved and expanded. - Size - increased from 1256 words to 1566 words (although this appears less it is still significant, see the reason below). - The article was restructured and visually appears better now. - Origin of dance, folk and tribal dance forms & contemporary dance were the new sections added. - Referencing improved from 2 to 38 (very good progress indeed in this aspect). - Images went up from one to five. - Sub-sections were made for the classical dance section. - Linking, grammar and other minor things were also improved.
However,
- There was no drastic increase in the size of article as it increased just by 1.25 times. This was because while new sections were added, old sections like Ottan Tullal, Dasi Assam and Modern day television shows were removed under WP:UNDUE http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:UNDUE. That reduced the article length substantially. - More sections need to be added to the classical dance - one para per each of the main classical dance forms. - Although the referencing has been improved to a great extent, there are still some *citation needed* tags present.
The top four editors of Dance in Indiahttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dance_in_Indiafor the month of February 2012 were:
1. Hisham http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hisham - 51 edits 2. Nitika.t http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nitika.t - 46 edits 3. Noopur28 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Noopur28 - 29 edits 4. Karthikndr http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Karthikndr - 11 edits
To encourage contribution, they have been awarded a Barnstar for taking time and effort to participate. Special thanks to Karthikndr for adding the references and helping in removing the *refimprove* tag just a day before the COTM was about to terminate. Also, thanks to AroundTheGlobehttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AroundTheGlobefor adding images to the article. Wikilove was sent to AroundTheGlobe for the same.
We still need more work to be done on Dance in Indiahttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dance_in_Indiaas it is one of the highest visibility articles of the WikiProject - it gets 500 to 600 pageviews per day!
*GA/FA of the month*
As far as Mohandas Karamchand Gandhihttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mohandas_Karamchand_Gandhigoes, there were 213 edits with the major contributors being AshLin http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AshLin, Hishamhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hisham, Rjensen http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rjensen and Dav subrajathan.357http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Dav_subrajathan.357&action=edit&redlink=1. Wikilove has been sent to motivate them to continue the long struggle.
The referencing is still being carefully weeded. It has been completely moved to cite templates now. A lot of dud references have been detected and replaced. In some cases what the reference was saying had no bearing to the text and was replaced. Preference was given to references which are verifiable online. Referencing continues because the article is a mixture of cite & Harvard referencing styles.
It was suggested we go in for one of three models of referencing -
- Direct referencing with Footnotes section & no bibliography - Shortened references with Bibliography at the end. - Harvard referencing.
It has been decided to move it to shortened urls/Bibliography model as the bibliography already exists and the Harvard referencing was in minority. Hopefully that once this ends, the GA proper can begin. The time taken for all this underlines the great importance of accurate referencing and choosing reliable sources.
Thank you all for contributing to this month’s INCOTM. Hoping for an even better response for the next COTM - APJ Abdul Kalamhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/APJ_Abdul_Kalam .
Cheers,
Pratik Lahoti.
User:BPositive