For Omar, Joe and I previously discussed trying
to jump on John Oliver's
social pull.... and I nearly forget to get him the quotes to do so. My
suggestions:
The outside world knows very little about former Taliban leader Mohammed
Omar, so little that it just found out he died two years ago. The US
government, as <link>John Oliver</link> noted on Sunday, had "vivid
descriptions" of him, including "hair: black" and "height:
tall."
Shorter:
As John Oliver noted last Sunday, the US government was able to come up
with "vivid descriptions" of former Taliban leader Mohammed Omar, including
"hair: black" and "height: tall."
Shortest:
As John Oliver noted last Sunday, former Taliban leader Mohammed Omar
"had been dead for two years, and [they] simply hadn't mentioned it.
Best,
--Ed
On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 8:09 PM, James Alexander <jalexander(a)wikimedia.org
Nice! Comments in line.
James Alexander
Community Advocacy
Wikimedia Foundation
(415) 839-6885 x6716 @jamesofur
On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 5:56 PM, Joe Sutherland <
jsutherland(a)wikimedia.org> wrote:
Hey all,
We just published "News on Wikipedia: Beijing wins Winter Olympics,
MH370 wreckage recovered, and more" to the Wikimedia blog. URL:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/beijing-olympics-mh370-wreckage/
We plan to send out five pieces of social for this story, spread
through the next *three days* (or thereabouts) to keep things timely.
Please do comment for tone.
*Twitter:*
• China's capital Beijing will host the 2022 Winter Olympics.
#NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM
[Sidenote - this is going to make the mental disambiguation of saying
"Beijing Olympics" in my head really annoying]
• Barack Obama (@potus) announced his Clean Power
Plan this week.
#cleanpower #NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM
• Wreckage found on French island Réunion is from
missing plane #MH370.
#NewsOnWikipedia
Perhaps "French territory *of *Réunion" ? That sounds better to me but
I'm not actually sure if it's more correct/better. You'll know the grammar
side better then I :). Otherwise LGTM
• Zimbabwe have requested the extradition of an
American hunter for
#Cecil's killing. #NewsOnWikipedia
• Secretive Taliban leader Mohammed Omar actually died in 2013.
#NewsOnWikipedia
Both LGTM
*Facebook/G+:*
• Beijing beat out Almaty of Kazakhstan to become the host city for the
2022 Winter Olympics this week. #NewsOnWikipedia
Hmmmm.... I'm torn between "Almaty of Kazakhstan" (which sounds awesome
but kinda sounds like an aristocratic name to me) and "Almaty, Kazakhstan".
Happy with either, otherwise LGTM
• Barack Obama unveiled his Clean Power Plan this week. #NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM
• Plane parts found on the French territory Réunion were this week
> confirmed as from missing Malaysia Airlines Flight 370. #NewsOnWikipedia
Same "of" question as above, otherwise LGTM
• Zimbabwe last week requested the extradition of American hunter Walter
> Palmer following the killing of Cecil the lion. #NewsOnWikipedia
perhaps "f*ormally* requested the extradition" ? (I'm not actually sure
that's true but I think it is? Just thinking that's different then some of
the random statements they mentioned about wanting extradition earlier).
Otherwise LGTM
> • Currently, only two images exist of former Taliban leader Mohammed
> Omar. This week it was confirmed that he died two years ago.
> #NewsOnWikipedia
Hmm, I'm happy with this one (I like the images fact) but worry that it
could feel like a bit of a non sequitur. Perhaps tying it together with
something like:
- Currently, only two images exist of former Taliban leader Mohammed
Omar. *It's likely to stay that way unless more are found because t*his
week it was confirmed that he died two years ago. #NewsOnWikipedia
best,
> Joe
> --
> *Joe Sutherland*
> Communications Intern [remote]
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> JSutherland <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)
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