Just posted these, as they had not gone out yet.
On Thu, Aug 21, 2014 at 1:54 PM, Tilman Bayer <tbayer(a)wikimedia.org> wrote:
On Wednesday, August 20, 2014, Carlos Monterrey <cmonterrey(a)wikimedia.org>
wrote:
*Hi all,*
*Here is the proposed SM for today's blog post on Jorge Royan. Thanks for
reviewing: *
*Blog post:*
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
*SM calendar: *
https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#August_20
*Remembering Jorge Royan*
- *t*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of Argentine
architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
- *t*: Architect, photographer, collaborator, friend - the Wikimedia
movement mourns the passing of Jorge Royan:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
Prefer this one over the first one - "saddened" is an ok-ish expression
when referring to a single organisation like in the post, but it is a bit
weird when applied to the whole movement. Actually, I would suggest leaving
it out altogether and writing instead "Wikimedians mourn the passing...".
- *f/g*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of
Argentine architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan.
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
Same here - I would suggest to reuse the modified wording of the second
tweet above.
*Spanish*:
- *t*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan,
arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigo:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
- *f/g*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan,
arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigohttps.
//blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
<https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/>
Wouldn't it be a bit weird to have these linking to an English post when
a
Spanish version (the original) is available too?
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Carlos Monterrey
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Tilman Bayer
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