On Wednesday, August 20, 2014, Carlos Monterrey <cmonterrey@wikimedia.org> wrote:

Hi all,

Here is the proposed SM for today's blog post on Jorge Royan. Thanks for reviewing:

Blog post:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/

SM calendar:
https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#August_20

Remembering Jorge Royan

t: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of Argentine architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/

t: Architect, photographer, collaborator, friend - the Wikimedia movement mourns the passing of Jorge Royan: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/

Prefer this one over the first one - "saddened" is an ok-ish expression when referring to a single organisation like in the post, but it is a bit weird when applied to the whole movement. Actually, I would suggest leaving it out altogether and writing instead "Wikimedians mourn the passing...".

f/g: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of Argentine architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan. https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/

Same here - I would suggest to reuse the modified wording of the second tweet above.

Spanish:

t: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan, arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigo: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/

f/g: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan, arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigohttps. //blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/

Wouldn't it be a bit weird to have these linking to an English post when a Spanish version (the original) is available too?

--
Carlos Monterrey
Communications Associate
Wikimedia Foundation
+1.415.839.6885 ext 6881
www.wikimediafoundation.org
blog.wikimedia.org

--
Sent from Gmail Mobile