Just posted these, as they had not gone out yet.
On Thu, Aug 21, 2014 at 1:54 PM, Tilman Bayer tbayer@wikimedia.org wrote:
On Wednesday, August 20, 2014, Carlos Monterrey cmonterrey@wikimedia.org wrote:
*Hi all,*
*Here is the proposed SM for today's blog post on Jorge Royan. Thanks for reviewing: *
*Blog post:* https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
*SM calendar: * https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#August_20
*Remembering Jorge Royan*
- *t*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of Argentine
architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
- *t*: Architect, photographer, collaborator, friend - the Wikimedia
movement mourns the passing of Jorge Royan: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
Prefer this one over the first one - "saddened" is an ok-ish expression
when referring to a single organisation like in the post, but it is a bit weird when applied to the whole movement. Actually, I would suggest leaving it out altogether and writing instead "Wikimedians mourn the passing...".
- *f/g*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of
Argentine architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan. https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
Same here - I would suggest to reuse the modified wording of the second tweet above.
*Spanish*:
- *t*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan,
arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigo: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
- *f/g*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan,
arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigohttps. //blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/ https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
Wouldn't it be a bit weird to have these linking to an English post when
a Spanish version (the original) is available too?
-- Carlos Monterrey Communications Associate Wikimedia Foundation +1.415.839.6885 ext 6881 www.wikimediafoundation.org blog.wikimedia.org
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