Thank you for the edits, Gregory! They are much appreciated!
On Tue, Dec 1, 2015 at 2:20 PM, Gregory Varnum greg.varnum@gmail.com wrote:
Few small edits (sorry for delay):
First FB: “is one of the most” - missing the ‘of’ right now
Not sure the one about the theme is as RT worthy as the others.
In the last FB: space missing before “macrophages” and maybe comma after that word too
Last T: “Since the outbreak” sounds odd to my ear for some reason - maybe “Since the 1980s outbreak” or “Since the outbreak began in the 1980s,"
-greg
On Dec 1, 2015, at 1:38 PM, Michael Guss mguss@wikimedia.org wrote:
Hello everyone,
Here is the proposed social media for World AIDS Day. Thank you for reviewing. Will send more as well.
EN:WP World AIDS Day https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day
Fb: HIV/AIDS is one the most important global public health issues in recorded history. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day
t: AIDS epidemic claims an estimated 2 million lives each year. #WORLDAIDSDay http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI
t: This year's theme for #WORLDAIDSDay: on the fast track to end AIDS. http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI
Like this PD image: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day#/media/File:WHredribbonNorthPor...
EN:WP Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS
Fb: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, although reconstruction of its genetic history shows that the HIV pandemic may have originated in Kinshasa, the capital of the Democratic Republic of the Congo, around 1920. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS
t: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, but has its origins dating back to 1920s Kinshasa, the capital of the Democratic Republic of the Congo. http://buff.ly/1XvtNAZ
EN:WP HIV/AIDS https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS
Fb: HIV is the cause of the spectrum of disease known as HIV/AIDS. HIV is a retrovirus that primarily infects components of the human immune system such as CD4+ T cells,macrophages and dendritic cells.
t: Since the the outbreak, more than 36 million people have died from HIV/AIDs. #WORLDAIDSDay http://buff.ly/1NlAxGx
PD image: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS#/media/File:HIV-budding-Color.jpg
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