Few small edits (sorry for delay):
First FB: “is one of the most” - missing the ‘of’ right now
Not sure the one about the theme is as RT worthy as the others.
In the last FB: space missing before “macrophages” and maybe comma after that word too
Last T: “Since the outbreak” sounds odd to my ear for some reason - maybe “Since the 1980s
outbreak” or “Since the outbreak began in the 1980s,"
-greg
On Dec 1, 2015, at 1:38 PM, Michael Guss
<mguss(a)wikimedia.org> wrote:
Hello everyone,
Here is the proposed social media for World AIDS Day. Thank you for reviewing. Will send
more as well.
EN:WP World AIDS Day <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day>
Fb: HIV/AIDS is one the most important global public health issues in recorded history.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day
<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day>
t: AIDS epidemic claims an estimated 2 million lives each year. #WORLDAIDSDay
http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI <http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI>
t: This year's theme for #WORLDAIDSDay: on the fast track to end AIDS.
http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI <http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI>
Like this PD image:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day#/media/File:WHredribbonNorthPo…
<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day#/media/File:WHredribbonNorthPortico.jpg>
EN:WP Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS
<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS>
Fb: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, although reconstruction of its genetic history
shows that the HIV pandemic may have originated in Kinshasa, the capital of the Democratic
Republic of the Congo, around 1920.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS
<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS>
t: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, but has its origins dating back to 1920s Kinshasa,
the capital of the Democratic Republic of the Congo.
http://buff.ly/1XvtNAZ <http://buff.ly/1XvtNAZ>
EN:WP HIV/AIDS <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS>
Fb: HIV is the cause of the spectrum of disease known as HIV/AIDS. HIV is a retrovirus
that primarily infects components of the human immune system such as CD4+ T
cells,macrophages and dendritic cells.
t: Since the the outbreak, more than 36 million people have died from HIV/AIDs.
#WORLDAIDSDay
http://buff.ly/1NlAxGx <http://buff.ly/1NlAxGx>
PD image:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS#/media/File:HIV-budding-Color.jpg
<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS#/media/File:HIV-budding-Color.jpg>
--
Michael Guss
Research Analyst
Wikimediafoundation.org
mguss(a)wikimedia.org
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