On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 1:43 PM, Victor Grigas vgrigas@wikimedia.org wrote:
I'd cut the 'as you can imagine' otherwise, LGTM
Hmmm, I'm interested in why. I like it in there, makes it feel more conversational and human to me.
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