On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 1:43 PM, Victor Grigas <vgrigas(a)wikimedia.org> wrote:
I'd cut the 'as you can imagine'
otherwise, LGTM
Hmmm, I'm interested in why. I like it in there, makes it feel more
conversational and human to me.
James Alexander
Community Advocacy
Wikimedia Foundation
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