Thanks Chris!
I added some info back in - I thought telling a story about why we did the testing and what we'll be going forward with was important. I know with these additions, I made it a little word-ier, but hopefully the blog and community folks will like it too. :)
Here's my edits https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1&diff=15334156&oldid=15334048 .
Cheers,
Deb
-- Deb Tankersley Product Manager, Discovery Wikimedia Foundation
On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 2:35 PM, Chris Koerner ckoerner@wikimedia.org wrote:
After some feedback from the blog folks I have an updated draft to share. Please take a look and provide any corrections. I think it tells the bigger story of changes coming to production, and explains our research quite well (not the other way around!).
I simplified the language, made it about 100 words shorter, put the big news at the top, and removed passive voice and adverbs.
https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1
Here's a diff https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ACKoerner_%28WMF%29%2FWork%2FA-B_Test_Results_1&type=revision&diff=15333867&oldid=15327844 of my slew of changes.
-- Yours, Chris Koerner Community Liaison - Discovery Wikimedia Foundation
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