Thanks Chris! 

I added some info back in - I thought telling a story about why we did the testing and what we'll be going forward with was important. I know with these additions, I made it a little word-ier, but hopefully the blog and community folks will like it too. :)

Here's my edits.

Cheers,

Deb

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Deb Tankersley
Product Manager, Discovery
Wikimedia Foundation

On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 2:35 PM, Chris Koerner <ckoerner@wikimedia.org> wrote:
After some feedback from the blog folks I have an updated draft to share. Please take a look and provide any corrections. I think it tells the bigger story of changes coming to production, and explains our research quite well (not the other way around!).

I simplified the language, made it about 100 words shorter, put the big news at the top, and removed passive voice and adverbs.


Here's a diff of my slew of changes. 

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Yours,
Chris Koerner
Community Liaison - Discovery
Wikimedia Foundation

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