[Foundation-l] cheatsheets: proofreaders wanted

Delphine Ménard notafishz at gmail.com
Tue Sep 23 07:51:37 UTC 2008


Hi, for some reason the text of the French version is not consistent
with the meta text and thus pretty wrong:

http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Cheatsheet/fr

There are many things that need to be changed.

Delphine

On Tue, Sep 23, 2008 at 08:42, effe iets anders
<effeietsanders at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Is it possible that something went wrong with the Dutch version? :) The
> italics etc in the "result" is not in italics ;-)
>
> Thanks! Lodewijk
>
> 2008/9/23 Luna <lunasantin at gmail.com>
>
>> Very nice. :)
>>
>> The only language I should be proofreading in is probably English,
>> though...
>>
>> I did notice a few things, which I'm only pointing out since I could see
>> these being printed en masse. ;)
>>
>> Regarding the *en *version:
>>
>>   - "bullet list" vs. "numbered list" (should probably be "bulleted" for
>>   consistency)
>>   - In the "result" column, some entries have the first letter of their
>>   first word capitalized, and others do not.
>>   - On en.wikipedia, at least, we use "sentence capitalization" for
>>   headings -- should we demonstrate that, even if we don't mention it? Say,
>>   "level 2" becomes "Second-level heading" or some such. Just a thought.
>>   - For signatures, the leading "--" isn't actually required.
>>   - May want to use a list of non-scalar values as the example for a
>>   bulleted list ("milk, cheese, cookies" rather than "one, two, three"), to
>>   better distinguish when each list might be useful.
>>
>> Also, quiddity's suggestions sound like they have merit.
>>
>> The new version looks a bit more eye-catching, which I rather like. Uses
>> more of the page space, a bit more contrasting color.
>>
>> The *es, hu, it, nl, and sv *versions have some odd linebreaks, in the wiki
>> text column, owing to text length. Not sure if that might be confusing or
>> not.
>>
>> Thanks for putting these together, I like them.
>> -Luna
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