On Dec 11, 2010, at 5:04 PM, Moka Pantages mpantages@wikimedia.org wrote:
Thanks for working on this. The message generally looks good to me.
they tend to be younger, European, educated males.
This wording is not quite good because "European" excludes the great number of editors from the United States (#1) and Canada (#3 for enwiki)
How about "younger, educated males from Europe and North America"
Cheers, Katie (@aude)