I'd remove the "Good for you" part, which could sound flippant, but
otherwise LGTM!
On Mon, Jan 5, 2015 at 2:14 PM, Fabrice Florin <fflorin(a)wikimedia.org>
wrote:
Thanks, Katherine!
Here’s some new copy with your proposed wording:
Twitter (@wikimedia/@wikipedia):
* Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and accessible
on Wikipedia!
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-
and-accessible/ link
* Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and accessible
on Wikipedia, surpassing our goals!
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-…
Facebook/Google+
* Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and
accessible! In just a month, you surpassed our goals to help grow Wikipedia
and its sister projects. Good for you! :) (link)
• Wikimedia supporters donated generously this holiday season to keep
knowledge free and accessible. Thanks for helping grow Wikipedia and its
sister projects! (link)
Cheers,
Fabrice
On Jan 5, 2015, at 1:31 PM, Katherine Maher <kmaher(a)wikimedia.org> wrote:
We actually raised more than $20M -- can we rewrite to remove the numbers,
and instead talk about "surpassing our goals"? Thanks!
On Mon, Jan 5, 2015 at 1:18 PM, Fabrice Florin <fflorin(a)wikimedia.org>
wrote:
Hi guys,
Happy New Year!
Here are proposed social media messages promoting this blog post, which
we just published:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-…
Twitter (@wikimedia/@wikipedia):
* Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and
accessible on Wikipedia!
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-…
link
* Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and
accessible on Wikipedia, donating more than $20M last month!
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-…
Facebook/Google+
* Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and
accessible! In just a month, you donated more than $20M to help grow
Wikipedia and its sister projects. Good for you! :) (link)
• Wikimedia supporters donated generously this holiday season to keep
knowledge free and accessible. Thanks for helping grow Wikipedia and
its sister projects! (link)
Tweak as you see fit. :)
All the best,
Fabrice
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