These look OK to me, although personally (more as a matter of taste) I would prefer to include a description of the content / scope in the tweet, too. E.g.:
This week's technical newsletter about software changes on Wikimedia sites, just out in 10+ languages:
or
Learn about the last software changes on Wikimedia sites in this week's technical newsletter, in 10+ languages:
I get the idea of opening with "Wikimedians" to clarify the audience, but the content description should do that too.
But again, your call ;)
On Mon, Jan 27, 2014 at 2:07 AM, Guillaume Paumier gpaumier@wikimedia.org wrote:
Proposed postings for this week:
@mediawiki, retweeted from @wikimedia:
Wikimedians, have you read this week's technical newsletter? Available in 10+ languages: https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Special:MyLanguage/Tech/News/2014/05
MediaWiki f/g, shared on Wikimedia@Google+:
Wikimedians, have you read the latest technical newsletter, available in 10+ languages? This week: Pages loading faster, others too slowly, and changes in the video viewer. https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Special:MyLanguage/Tech/News/2014/05
-- Guillaume Paumier
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