Nice blog post.
Suggestion: "Unlike *Red October*, this ship was sunk"
Pine
On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 11:27 AM, Ed Erhart eerhart@wikimedia.org wrote:
(+Nick)
I know I wrote this one, but I'd change "Unlike The Hunt for Red October, this German battleship was sunk" -> "Unlike The Hunt for Red October, this ship was sunk."
--Ed
On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 12:45 PM, Joe Sutherland <jsutherland@wikimedia.org
wrote:
Hey all,
We just published "The Hunt for Tirpitz" to the blog. URL:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
Many thanks to Nick for this post.
Below are some proposed social media messages. Please tweak as needed.
*Twitter (@wikipedia/@wikimedia):* • After the British sunk the German battleship Bismarck, they turned their attention to its sister ship. https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/ • Why did an Australian Wikipedian write about British attacks on a German battleship in Norway? https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
*Facebook/Google+:* • After the British sunk the German battleship Bismarck, they turned their attention to its sister ship. https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/ • The British Royal Navy targeted this German battleship in three separate operations but could not sink the heavily armored warship. https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/ • Why did an Australian Wikipedian write about British attacks on a German battleship in Norway? https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/ • Unlike The Hunt for Red October, this German battleship was sunk. https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
thanks, Joe
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