Yeah, the promotional issue occurred to me. I think it's a legitimate entertainment development and the page is amazing. If we cut the mention of ticket sales, is that enough?
On Sunday, October 18, 2015, Michael Guss mguss@wikimedia.org wrote:
I prefer the second; the first sounds a little too promotional with the mention of ticket sales.
On Sunday, October 18, 2015, Jeff Elder <jelder@wikimedia.org javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jelder@wikimedia.org');> wrote:
The new Star Wars movie is trending on Twitter. Tickets go on sale Monday. There's a detailed article page. Should we jump in?
Facebook: Wikipedians have assembled lots of information about @The Force Awakens, the first live-action Star Wars film in 10 years. Tickets go on sale Monday. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Wars:_The_Force_Awakens
Twitter: Facebook: Find out more about #TheForceAwakens, the first live-action @StarWars film in 10 years. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Wars:_The_Force_Awakens
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