[WikiEN-l] Twitterpedia will win
FT2
ft2.wiki at gmail.com
Tue May 5 12:41:33 UTC 2009
That is why Twitterpedia also has an article on "eponymous", of course.
Naturally all measurements are in metric however, so it's the "Eponymous
4.8km" (approx)
FT2
On Tue, May 5, 2009 at 11:45 AM, Carcharoth <carcharothwp at googlemail.com>wrote:
> On Tue, May 5, 2009 at 11:25 AM, geni <geniice at gmail.com> wrote:
> > 2009/5/5 <wjhonson at aol.com>:
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: FT2 <ft2.wiki at gmail.com>
> >> To: English Wikipedia <wikien-l at lists.wikimedia.org>
> >> Sent: Tue, 5 May 2009 12:35 am
> >> Subject: Re: [WikiEN-l] Twitterpedia will win
> >>
> >> Redundant text - "the X war was a war" duh :) Try this:
> >>
> >> "The Peloponnesian War (Ancient Greece, 431-404BC), took place between
> >> Athens and its empire, against the Eponymous League led by Sparta. Rock
> >> on!">>
> >>
> >> ---------------------
> >> Why do you have to state "Ancient Greece" ? And remove "The"
> >> Also "was" is much shorter than "took place"
> >>
> >> "Peloponnesian War (431-404BC), Athens and its empire, against the
> >> Spartan-led Eponymous League."
> >>
> >
> > "Peloponnesian War (431-404BC), Athens and its empire vs Spartan-led
> > Eponymous League."
>
> "Eponymous" could be confusing. Repeating the word Peloponnesian is
> less confusing.
>
> Carcharoth
>
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