[WikiEN-l] Re: Privacy policy and editing anonymously notice.

[Timwi]

> (Your previous version was: "Warning: By submitting edits to
> Wikipedia, your IP address, which is personally-identifiable
> information, will be associated with your edit. If you are not logged
> in, your IP address will be permanently and publically associated with
> your edits. If you are logged in, your IP address will not be
> publically displayed, however it will be kept for around 2 weeks.")
> 
> My suggested wording is:
> 
>     All edits to Wikipedia are recorded and visible, with the [[IP
> address]] they are from. Your IP address is publicly visible on edits
> where you are not [[Special:Userlogin|logged in]]. See
> [[wikipedia:privacy policy|privacy policy]].

Even shorter:

	Your [[IP address]] will be logged when you submit. If you are
	not [[Special:Userlogin|logged in]], it will be shown publicly.
	See [[Wikipedia:Privacy policy|privacy policy]].

Timwi