[Foundation-l] [WikiEN-l] Re: Privacy policy and editing anonymously notice.

[David Gerard]

Timwi wrote:

>Even shorter:
>	Your [[IP address]] will be logged when you submit. If you are
>	not [[Special:Userlogin|logged in]], it will be shown publicly.
>	See [[Wikipedia:Privacy policy|privacy policy]].


"SUBMIT! SUBMIT TO WIKIPEDIA!" heh :-)

The use of "logged" in two different ways is (apparently) very bad. How about:

    Your [[IP address]] is recorded when you edit. If you are not
[[Special:Userlogin|logged in]], it will be shown publicly. See
[[Wikipedia:Privacy policy|privacy policy]].

Can anyone go even shorter and not lose important info?


- d.