I just meant they seemed so heartless, whereas Coriolanus seems warmer by the end of the play.

On 8/4/2012 10:09 PM, James Ayres wrote:
Thanks for your notes Michael.  Not sure if I can follow all of them, though, e.g., the notions of "emotional malice"  and "emotionally dead."  Your observation about the Coriolanus "embrace" is interesting, insightful.  I agree, what I saw at Winedale was a performance that chose not to go in any direction.

Doc
On Aug 3, 2012, at 7:17 PM, saengerm@southwestern.edu wrote:

Hi Doc,

I think you're right about Coriolanus; he doesn't fit with Aristotle any more than he fits with Rome or his own family.  And I think that makes him off-putting, to Romans as well as critics.  We don't know what to do with him, any more than the Romans do.

I think the impulse, understandably, has been to pressure the play to be a touch allegorical, which means that it is either conservative (deriding the fickle plebeians) or leftist (scorning the arrogant patricians).  What I saw at Winedale that night was a performance that didn't pressure the play in either direction.  And what emerged, for me, was a kind of emotional malice coming from figures like his mother, and the blond guy who was either Sicinius or Brutus; I'm not sure, but he did this wonderfully, and most dangerously from Aufidius, who seems to always dodge a fair and conclusive fight with his rival.  In this landscape of emotional coldness, I read the (relatively) silent Virgilia and the irascible and profoundly unlikable Coriolanus to emerge as warm, because in the land of the emotionally dead, those with half a heart become sympathetic.

For me this became particularly apparent when Coriolanus embraced Aufidius, putting his hand on the back of his neck.  It was almost a moment of intimacy (which, very subtly, draws on what many critics read as a homoerotic undercurrent).  And it was also tragically asymmetrical.  Coriolanus thinks that the intimacy creates a permanent bond, but of course, for Aufidius it is only a provisional one.

Michael


Quoting James Ayres <jayres@cvctx.com>:

Well, Mike, Mike, and Jerald.  Actually many scholars don't think the  play is at all interesting but in fact something of a puzzle that  every generation of directors, actors, and critics must attempt to  solve.  Yes, for Eliot, it might have been a greater "tragic"  achievement than Hamlet. For the like of me, I could never figure that  out.  Coriolanus does not measure up well with his (well, not actually  his, but borrowed) "objective correlative" notion either.  He did not  like Hamlet, for sure.  When I met him in '57 in Gregory Gym, I should  have asked why.

I must confess that I really never liked the play.  That is why my  graduate director, John Harold Wilson, demanded that I explore its  dramatic history in my dissertation.  For me the play has problems.    I see nothing "heroic" or "tragic" in the central figure.  The text  does not really give us too much of a chance to get inside him.  Yes,  he is a war hero, swift with sword, and very proud indeed. Like  Hotspur, he is himself on the battlefield, but comfortable nowhere  else.  I just do not see dimensions in the man, tragic or otherwise.  He is more talked about than talking.  He seems to me a subject, or  perhaps a (threatening?) symbol, for discussion, and I find myself  waiting for him to rise above all of that.  But he does not.  Scholars  have listed, as they will, his "tragic flaw" as "pride."  In the play,  he is described as "too noble for the world,"  One critic commented  that he was  "more sinned against than sinning,"  inviting an absurd  comparison with Lear.

I was amused by the Times' notion that he relates poorly to his  country's commoners. "Poorly"? He despises them.  They are stupid.   For that matter, he relates "poorly" to just about everyone he  encounters. And everyone seems to have difficulty communicating with  him.  Even mom, who (almost alone?) carries the Roman values.  His  wife is described as a "sweet silence"?  Hmmmm.

On one occasion, I told Professor Wilson that I thought that  Coriolanus was one of those Pirandello folks searching for an author,  or a play, or a life.
He shook his head and tried to smile.  For me, he is a helpless,  solitary, figure whose only distinction is killing people.  Aufidius  is the same.  That is what they share.

And yes, director's "notes" for performances seem to focus on the  "relevant political" interest in the play.  While it is rather clear  that whoever wrote this play wanted us to hear the conflicting voices  of the patricians, tribunes, and commoners (scenes often played for  comedy, alas), I still wonder where it all ends up.  Coriolanus never  really runs "for" office.  In fact, he runs "from" it.  Granted, that  like most candidates, he is not well-suited for political office.     And why should he be running for consul when the country is beset by  an intruding enemy which he can tackle more handily on foot in the  battlefield than in office?  And as well, a deteriorating internal  class struggle.  And then there's mom.

I have always felt that mom was the strongest voice in the play,  should be.  She is Rome.

Going on too long, I know, but have to say finally that I think the  play is not tragedy but irony, presenting the audience with characters  struggling unsuccessfully for meaning, order, for certainty.   Certainly, Coriolanus' last, Posthumus-like, sequences, illustrate  that and as well the final moment which startles us with an act of  murder followed by an heroic burial.  Sorry, but I cannot find anyone  valuable in this play.

The Winedale performance I saw was the same one you attended,  Michael.  You wrote that it was an "emotional" experience.  I'd like  to hear the why and where of it in specific terms.  Apparently, I  missed some things.  I did see some very enthusiastic kids struggling  independently with the characterization, conflict, and language with a  tough assignment.  Some really super great line deliveries.  But not  an end.  For me, alas, it is still the puzzle I addressed in 1963.


Cheers,

Doc














On Aug 3, 2012, at 10:57 AM, saengerm@southwestern.edu wrote:

Oh, I think that's accurate.  Most scholars would call the play  interesting, but I haven't heard it heralded very much.  That said,  I think performance can make a strong case for looking at the play  differently.  From what I understand, past performances have tended  to make the play read politically--the recent Fiennes version does  this very strongly.  What struck me as really interesting about the  Winedale production is that it really didn't come off as a political  play, for me, but more of an emotional one.  That surprised me, in a  good way, and not just because our world already has an excess of  politically inflected discourse.  I also think the play emerges  really powerfully on emotional terms.

Mike

Quoting Mike Godwin <mnemonic@gmail.com>:

I'm astonished to see the New York Times declare that "Coriolanus"  is not a
heralded play. It's not a *popular* play, but this is hardly the  same thing.

--Mike

ik

On Friday, August 3, 2012, wrote:

Just my humble opinion, but the performance of Coriolanus is  really moving
and wonderfully done.  I had very high hopes, and I wasn't  disappointed at
all.

This is a great play if you have the opportunity to see it.

Michael

Quoting Jerald Head <jlhead1952@gmail.com>:

Nice blurb NYTimes today about upcoming show "Coriolanus"

"The actors participating in the University of Texas?s  Shakespeare at
Winedale summer workshop will perform ?Coriolanus? for the first  time in
its 42-year history. Though it is not a heralded play, this  political drama
was adapted for the screen last year, with Ralph Fiennes and  Gerard Butler,
and T. S. Eliot called it a greater tragic achievement than ? Hamlet.?

The story follows a mighty Roman warrior whose one obstacle to  office is
how poorly he relates to his country?s commoners. In this  election, no
matter whom you tag as Coriolanus, the same point comes across: no
candidate is perfect."


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