On Thu, Apr 30, 2009 at 12:40 AM, John Vandenberg jayvdb@gmail.com wrote:
Policies, procedures and the manual of style may govern how and when the software may be used, however decisions to deprecate or disable software features are best left in the hands of the technical staff.
I'm not clear what it would mean for users to deprecate or disable a feature. They can choose not to use it, or request that it be disabled, but they don't have the ability to actually disable it themselves, so I don't know what this paragraph is supposed to be saying.
I don't see any errors other than that.