I am quite confident that he will explain it to me one
day, perhaps in
France in front of a beer this summer. I am preparing the grass (mostly
weeds actually) and the flowers (these are neat) and the outside
wood-table (this one is perfect now) so that the environnement is good
for talking of such things.
I have no trouble imagining the scene except for one jarring detail --
beer?!? A conversation over a wooden table in a French pastoral
setting may include vin ordinaire, sure; un petit café, certainly; but
beer is all wrong for that mise en scène.
Please correct this detail in your final draft.
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Sean Barrett | Pretentious ... moi?
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