On 17/01/07, Gary Kirk <gary.kirk(a)gmail.com> wrote:
I don't know whether it has legal connotations or
was written from a
manual of style or similar, but to me, 'Thank you to all those who
donated from the Wikimedia Foundation!' looks funny. I think 'The
Wikimedia Foundation thanks all those who donated [to us/to the
Wikimedia Foundation] during [the/our] fundraiser'.
I was meaning to find someone on IRC last night with access to this,
but failed - it really would read better as "...all those who donated,
from the..." - the comma clarifies that we mean [thanks to donors]
[from us] not [thanks to] [donors who are part of us].
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- Andrew Gray
andrew.gray(a)dunelm.org.uk