On April 27, Yaroslav M. Blanter wrote:
I have done a couple of changes on the Etherpad, feel
free to revert.
Otherwise, the ad looks pretty good.
Thanks, I included your (and Andrew's) changes in a new version that I
uploaded at <http://tools.wikimedia.pl/~odder/wlm/ad/Ad_v2vJBAG.pdf> —
this includes fixing a typo, changing "a global (...) competition" into
"an international" (...) competition, and getting rid of "in
history".
I also changed "the largest ever volunteer-driven photography
competition" into "the largest ever volunteer-driven effort for
preserving the cultural heritage of humanity" (a phrase that we used
last year), since we already mentioned in the first paragraph that WLM
is a photo competition.
There might still be some updates coming — I'm still waiting for
Lodewijk's answer about my earlier message — so please stay tuned :-)
-- Tomasz