Thanks. Feedback is welcome until tonight. 

Unfortunately I will rather have to cut information short, than to add more, so I'll have to look into that. I'm afraid Jonathans suggestion about Armenia wouldn't fit in - but it would also be a great opportunity for a blog post. 

Lodewijk

On Mon, Apr 11, 2016 at 2:21 PM, Yaroslav M. Blanter <putevod@mccme.ru> wrote:

On 2016-04-11 00:14, Lodewijk wrote:

Hi all,

below a first draft - the piece about Italy is still missing. I think
we have a nice diversity this way! It's cramming a bit more, so lets
see how this works out.

Best,
Lodewijk

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Hi Lodewijk,

hope it is not too late. The text looks good, but I think in the first line explanation is missing on what WLM actually is - smth like crowdsourcing photographic competition which aims at collecting all architectural monuments all over the world  - unless of course there is a lede in the article which has already explained this.

Cheers
Yaroslav

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