I agree that this is important. However, it seems to be masked in a lot of jargon, so that it is difficult to get to the main point, which is important.

 

Remember, no one reads things like this. At best they scan them. This may not be an ideal situation, but it is reality.

 

I suggest a one sentence summary in bold and big type on top, followed by all the legalese you want.

 

Danny