Hi Benoît, It's always better to have some changeable part of the page separately from its translatable part. Could you please move targets list from https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Collaboration/Newsletter/Subscribe to its subpage? Thanks. *--* *Vira Motorko* project manager, Wikimedia Ukraine <https://ua.wikimedia.org/> non-profit organisation m: +380667740499 | f: vira.motorko <https://www.facebook.com/vira.motorko> | w: Ата <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:Ата> Are you saving your documents in free formats? ;) Help save natural resources – please think twice before printing this e-mail or any attachments. 2016-10-10 13:27 GMT+03:00 Benoît Evellin (Trizek) &lt;bevellin(a)wikimedia.org&gt;rg>:

Le 10/10/2016 à 12:27, Benoît Evellin (Trizek) a écrit : The page, then the direct translation link, please be exhaustive; it’s hard to read in itself. I’ve got a few remarks/suggestions about the format of the newsletter. * The template looks like the one for the Tech News. When things are similar I like them to follow a really identical format. ** The very first sentence has its link on the team instead of the news (which lack the bold appearance). I understand you want the Collaboration highlighted. I’d be glad to have some adjective to represent the team & products (just like ‘tech’) because ‘Collaboration products’ do not produce a great effect in French. Then that would solve the previous problem too. ** There are fewer links at the bottom? And also $technews as a variable — :P. * I’ve got a personal problem with hyphens used like dashes. Please use at least an en dash, or a middle dot (in [More information · Help pages]). * Your apostrophs aren’t curved… I’d also say some more time for doing the translation could help (as it’s a bit long…), even though it’s great to be stressed sometimes. Nice trick anyway. Regards, -- Sylvain