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On Mon, Aug 25, 2014 at 10:32 AM, Maria Cruz <mcruz@wikimedia.org> wrote:

Hi team, 

I am sending out a proposal for twitter, FB and G+ for this blogpost I wrote last week. Let me know your thoughts. 

Link to blogpost: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/22/grants-programs-and-learning-at-wikimania-london/

Link to Social Media Calendar: 

https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#August_25

*t: With 2000+ participants, #Wikimania2014 witnessed knowledge sharing on many levels! Here's Grantmaking's insights: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/22/grants-programs-and-learning-at-wikimania-london/

This is too long I think. I would remove "Here's" and just say something like,

*t: With 2000+ participants, #Wikimania2014 witnessed knowledge sharing on many levels! Grantmaking insights: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/22/grants-programs-and-learning-at-wikimania-london/

 

* F/G+: With over 2,000 participants, this year's Wikimania was the scenario of multiple exchanges, on many levels. We now share the insights from Grantmaking team. How did these conversations affect the current course of work? What are some of the new challenges we are facing in promoting Wikimedia programs? 

"How did these conversations affect the current course of work" confuses tense a little bit when I read it. Would, "How will these conversations affect our work?" mean what you intend?

 

Thanks!

María Cruz  \\  Community Coordinator, PE&D Team \\ Wikimedia Foundation, Inc.               

mcruz@wikimedia.org  |  :  @marianarra_

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