Yes, I agree that this would be better:

Today, we launched our 7th Annual Report. Here’s the story of how it was created. (link)

(the earlier copy was from my own tweet on my personal account, which needed to establish WMF as the source of the report.)

Cheers,


-f

On Jan 22, 2015, at 8:01 AM, Joe Sutherland <jsutherland@wikimedia.org> wrote:

That’s a good idea :) I don’t have the means to post this under the Wikimedia handles, but as soon as we can sort out the WMF/our thing, we should be good to go!

On 21 January 2015 at 10:14:30 pm, Fabrice Florin (fflorin@wikimedia.org) wrote:

Thanks, Joe.

Yes, please tweak as needed.

I just wanted to start the thread, so we don’t forget.

We're in an offsite today, so didn’t have a lot of time to make the copy perfect :)

-f


On Jan 21, 2015, at 1:17 PM, Joe Sutherland <jsutherland@wikimedia.org> wrote:

Hi,

I love the report! Some comments on the wording below...

On 21 January 2015 at 9:08:17 pm, Fabrice Florin (fflorin@wikimedia.org) wrote:

Hey social media team,

We just published a blog post about the making of the annual report, by our own Heather Walls:

https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/21/annual-report/

Congrats again to Heather and everyone who worked on this absolutely wonderful report :)


Here are some ideas for how to spread the word on social networks:


Twitter (@wikimedia/@wikipedia):

Today, WMF launched our 7th Annual Report. Here’s the story of how it was created. (link)

This is really weird to my ears. “WMF” is a thing, and combining it with “our” is a mismatch in this instance. If we’re tweeting from @wikimedia, then I’d suggest “we” instead of “WMF”. Otherwise, try “...WMF launched its…”?


Facebook/Google+

Today, WMF launched our 7th Annual Report. This year’s theme: knowledge is a foundation. Here’s the story of how this report was created.  
(link)

I like the snappiness, but my above point still stands for this.

Joe


Please help us get the word out about this story :)

Thanks!


Fabrice
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